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Bosmer EU - [Bosmer] Feaiye - Critique Valued

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I want to make my Bosmer now!
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Do it! Do it and we shall form the league of Extraordinary BOSS-MER.
http://www.guildwars2roleplayers.com/home/m/2737230/viewthread/22866336-new-haven-clinic-lions-arch/page/1

Would ya just look at it!? :p
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Very interesting character. I'm curious as to why a Bosmer would be apart of the DC though, I hope to Role-play with you! :)


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Very interesting character. I'm curious as to why a Bosmer would be apart of the DC though, I hope to Role-play with you! :)
She has reasons, I can promise you that. Although they are not completely her own...
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One thing about your wording confuses me though, she is described as both of much shorter standing than those around her and on-par with an Altmer. Unless the standing refers to her social status it should probably be "in much lower standing" and to get a bosmer on par with an Altmer... well, prepare plateau heels or outright stilts. Altmer, even the women, are very tall.
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What happened to the picture?
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One thing about your wording confuses me though, she is described as both of much shorter standing than those around her and on-par with an Altmer. Unless the standing refers to her social status it should probably be "in much lower standing" and to get a bosmer on par with an Altmer... well, prepare plateau heels or outright stilts. Altmer, even the women, are very tall.

I think you've confused yourself. :3 "While the dress did indeed elevate the young woman to stand on par with the straight-backed Altmer in her company..." Is saying that the dress she's wearing is making her look pretty and "on-par worthy" beside an Altmer. Not talking height here. :)
What happened to the picture?
I've removed it for now as it made too big of a gap on the profile, but I'm planning on adding it later in a "spoiler" thingy.
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Okay I get it.
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NO, YOU DON'T GET IT!!!
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